Failing hard - BEDA #13-14-15

So, I admit it.
I'm failing this BEDA. Failing really hard.
But this time, instead of quitting, I decided to embrace my failure and go on.
I can do that.

So... these are the lyrics to my most recent song. it's based on a book called Where the river ends, and I'm in love with it for a couple weeks now. Just hope the author doesn't get mad, and that I'm not breaking any copyright laws...

(yes, I plan on posting a video of me singing it. When? Nice question. )

I’ll take us down down down

    where the river ends

  You will ride on a wooden horse

Drink wine at the beach

Laugh until it hurts

catch like 57 fish

swim naked on a river

go looping on a plane

And if you dance all night with me

I’ll paint you all over again

I will try to make the sun

Stop turning around

And i’ll try to make our days

All we care about

I have never made a promise

I couldn’t complete

You’re the one to build a bridge

to the islands of me

As we go down down down

    were the river ends

Try to capture your life in ink

But you’re right inside of me

I see you play around those dolphins

‘till you get to the sea

I will try to make the sun

Stop turning around

And i’ll try to make our days

All we care about

I have never made a promise

I couldn’t complete

You’re the one to build a bridge

to the islands of me

when we went down down down

    were the river ends

I could spend all my days lying down

On the river by your side